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rapid seas, coral caves
shooting stars, neon waves
candy coated, laquer kisses
blacker nights, perfect wishes
music boxes, blue romance
nervous phrases, contagious chance
lullaby, and goodnight
enhanced senses, waxy light
plastic planet, accidents
purfume smiles, words unspent
frozen moments, ticking walls
crocodiles, pale waterfalls
burning sidewalks, polished sand
rainbow glances, take my hand
walk beside me, on tight rope
exploding colours, give me hope
©2005-2010 ~heartscars
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:iconsquire22:
This is a really good quality piece, it works really well, the ryhming is good and the description is good. I especially like the way you've put words together such as 'perfume smiles', 'rainbow glances', I enjoyed reading this, thankyou :)

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